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A Mile of River by Judith Allnatt – the long hot summer of 1976 revisited

It is 1976 and England is suffocating. The long, dry spring has given way to a summer of severe drought, with standpipes in the streets and a rallying cry to ‘save water, share a bath!’ For the farmers, life has become a living hell – a daily struggle to make ends meet. The fields are tinder dry, the earth is dusty and scorched and the rivers are drying up to a trickle.
Jess and Tom live on a remote farm in the English countryside with their increasingly difficult and brutal father, Henry. Their mother, Sylvie, walked out years before and Jess is struggling with the role of mother figure to Tom, as well as skivvy and hired hand for her father. Jess just wants to be a normal teenager, to go to dances and kiss boys, to take her exams and dream of a future far away from milking cows and ploughing fields. Daydreaming about her mother’s return, Jess discovers Sylvie’s old diary and begins to uncover the shocking truth about her disappearance.
As the drought grips ever tighter, as the water level of the river begins to drop, the menace in the air builds until it reaches boiling point, with a confrontation between Jess and her father that has devastating consequences.

As a UK farmer’s daughter who was twelve years old in that summer of 1976, I was naturally enough drawn to this book and it is indeed a very lyrical read. The countryside and the effect of the devastating drought during its inexorable progression through the year are expertly described, and brought back some interesting memories for me. Plus it’s always very heartening to read a book that includes back issues of Farmers Weekly. A classy publication, naturally.

Not only that but the character of Jess is very powerful indeed, and she’s an excellent voice with which to convey the setting and situations of the novel. I also thought Tom, her younger brother, was well depicted – and really this is a book where the young people are very much in the limelight. This helps convey the plot through fresh eyes, where a main older viewpoint might perhaps have grown stale.

Which brings me to the voice of Jess’ mother, Sylvie. Her backstory sections felt very much like an interloper on the scene and I didn’t appreciate being taken away from what was happening with Jess and Tom. Soon I noticed myself skipping through these, as I wasn’t quite sure what their purpose was, apart from to emphasise how Jess’ father Henry is the Villain of the Piece (more on this later …) and how the farm is in trouble even before 1976. Oh and to create the tension of Sylvie’s disappearance of course – though this might have been better conveyed through the use of her diaries, as found by Jess. It also irritated me that (SLIGHT spoiler alert!) half way through, we are told exactly what happened to Sylvie, and all that tension is instantly lost. With just a little more judicious editing, and by means of cutting a mere page of text, the tension could have remained until it actually needed fulfilment later on through Jess’ viewpoint.

That said however, the ultimate revelation about Sylvie is more than a tad melodramatic, and I wasn’t at all convinced Jess would act in the way she did once the discovery had occurred. Really I was quite cross about it all as I don’t think the plot needed quite so much stretching.

Turning then to Henry, I have to say I thought he was a very poorly depicted character, and deserved far better than Allnatt allowed him. Actually, caricature is more the word, I think, rather than character – and this aspect lets down what is at heart a pretty good novel. There is no redeeming feature about Henry, and I soon became rather sorry for him even though I believe I was supposed to hate him, and took to laughing with disbelief every time he surfaced on the page. In my experience, absolutely no farmers – at least in Essex – were ever this narrow-minded, bitter, cruel and ridiculous to their families in 1976. He’s like something from the 18th century. Here are some examples of Henry’s general wickedness: he keeps Jess off school during the run up to her A levels as he doesn’t want her to leave home or have a career; he shows no concern for Tom or Jess when a fire devastates the farm buildings (in which Tom is trapped); he treats his children like strangers in his own home and frequently ignores them; he’s rude to every single neighbour and pretty nasty to his own parents too. Really, the list goes on.

So call me old-fashioned but having Henry show a glimmer of normality and even a drop of the milk of human kindness would have been far more effective than this unnatural monster. Indeed, his caricature robs the book of a deep part of its family tension which otherwise would have been both rich and devastating.

Besides Allnatt can write decent menfolk if she puts her mind to it – Jess’ grandfather is great and the most sensible person in the book; and Philip, the young man who starts a relationship with Jess later in the story is simply wonderful and I would have married him like a shot if I’d met anyone like him in my part of the world in the ’70s, I’m sure. More of Philip and the grandfather would have been marvellous.

However, and finally, I must say that the ending to this novel is utterly perfect in every way and (almost) cancelled out some of the oddities and judgement errors that led up to it. How I love a pitch-perfect finale – so if Allnatt keeps up that sort of quality in the whole of her next book, I’d definitely be interested in reading it.

A Mile of River, Black Swan Press 2009, ISBN 978-0552774352
Also available as an ebook

[Anne remembers the summer of 1976 in the farming community all too well, and secretly enjoyed not having to bathe too often. Her latest book is The Truth About Butterflies, a lesbian erotic collection]

About annebrooke

Anne Brooke lives in Surrey, UK, and writes in a variety of genres, including gay erotic romance, fantasy, comedy, thrillers, biblical fiction and the occasional chicklit novel. When not writing, she spends time in the garden attempting to differentiate between flowers and weeds, and in the allotment attempting to grow vegetables. Occasionally, she can also be found in the kitchen making cakes. Every now and again, they are edible. Her websites can be found at: www.annebrooke.com, www.gayreads.co.uk, www.biblicalfiction.co.uk and www.gathandria.com (for fantasy fiction).

16 comments on “A Mile of River by Judith Allnatt – the long hot summer of 1976 revisited

  1. Kate Lace
    September 20, 2012

    Definitely tempted to read this. I remember that summer really well and the book sounds intriguing

  2. annebrooke
    September 20, 2012

    Yes, it’s really interesting for those of us who remember ’76, so do give it a try, Kate!

    Anne
    xxx

  3. Moira
    September 20, 2012

    Gosh yes, I remember that horrific summer so vividly. My major memory is of siphoning the bath water out of the window into water-carriers in a (vain) attempt to keep garden alive. My OTHER memory is when the rains finally came – the incredibly vivid, eye-searing green of the new shoots of grass …

    This books sounds thoroughly intriguing. Such a pity about the one-note father – but the rest sounds very promising?

  4. annebrooke
    September 20, 2012

    Yes, me too, Moira! It’s amazing what we found to do with second-hand (or third-hand) bathwater!!… Yes, apart from the terrible one-note father and moments of melodrama, it’s definitely one to try out 🙂

    Anne
    xxx

  5. Jackie
    September 20, 2012

    Count me as another who remembers that summer vividly, but it wasn’t drought conditions in the US. It was our Bicentennial, but I digress. This sounds like an intriguing, if uneven novel. Unfortunately, I can believe a parent can be like that, so he may not be as much of a caricature as first appears. The good parts of this book sounds like it would make it worthwhile, even if it all didn’t measure up.

  6. annebrooke
    September 20, 2012

    Intriguing but uneven sums it up perfectly, Jackie! 🙂

  7. Jane Steen (@janesteen)
    September 21, 2012

    I was 16 – I remember nearly killing myself running a mile in the heat to get to my German O Level, and then later getting my results by the seaside – I think we spent almost the whole of the holidays on the beach (sun, sand and flirting with the boys!) The fields had huge cracks in them; there was a myxamatosis plague among the wild rabbits and they would just sit there in the blazing field, waiting to die.

    How wonderful that there’s a novel about that summer. I’m putting it on my list.

  8. annebrooke
    September 21, 2012

    Oh gosh, Jane – I’d forgotten about the myxamatosis plague – you’ve brought that all back. We had dying rabbits all over our apple fields and I remember whenever my father was out in the landrover and came across one, he’d run it over to put it out of its misery. Goodness there’s a memory!

    Anne
    xxx

  9. marina72
    September 21, 2012

    She also wrote a lovely historical novel called The Poet’s Wife, about John Clare’s mental illness and its effect on his family.

  10. annebrooke
    September 21, 2012

    Oh yes, I’ve heard that’s quite good, thanks, Marina! Must admit to not being a fan of John Clare myself, but it would certainly be an interesting subject.

  11. Stevie Carroll
    September 22, 2012

    I’m writing about 1976 as well, so I definitely need to read that one. I was around, but most of my memories are based on the retelling of family stories about the reservoir levels going down.

  12. annebrooke
    September 22, 2012

    Definitely a good one for research, Stevie! Enjoy the writing 🙂

    Anne
    xxx

  13. littlenavyfish
    September 23, 2012

    Re. Henry not having any redeeming features – have you read A Thousand Acres by Jane Smiley? The father figure in that is similar in that I just found him a horrible, horrible man with nothing to reconcile him to me, but I think it worked better there than you reckon it did in this book. I really enjoyed this review 🙂

  14. Kate
    September 23, 2012

    1976 was green and white checked flares (I was 12, I had no taste), and meeting myxmatosed rabbits in the hills and not knowing what to do for them, and it was damned HOT. In Aberdeen!
    Irredeemable farming fathers: Lewis Grassic Gibbon’s Guthrie in Sunset Song, he’s a bad ‘un, a bully and a monster but you can see why it all went wrong for him, his Scottish farm was pretty tough work. There’s a sense of ‘if only’ underneath his brutality. Do the times, the politics, the economy, have anything to do with the irredeemability of Henry? I would have thought that those would affect a farmer more than a lot of other professions.

  15. annebrooke
    September 23, 2012

    LNV – yes, I loved the Smiley book – it’s an amazing reinterpretation of King Lear. Loved it! 🙂 Didn’t have the same problem with the father there, who felt very human. And see what you mean, Kate, but Henry here is sadly too much of a caricature to really feel as if outside circumstances affected him.

    Anne
    xxx

  16. shukie39
    March 18, 2016

    Sounds like a must read.

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