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Devil’s Consort by Anne O’Brien: where I’m not actually sure the Devil would have bothered …

July, 1137. In the baking sunshine of Bordeaux, Eleanor, Duchess of Aquitaine, eagerly awaits her first meeting with the prince who will become her husband. Poor Louis Capet is no fit match for educated, independent Eleanor. When he inherits the throne of France, it becomes clear that his monastic ways and indecisive rule could cost him his country – and his marriage. Determined to rule her own lands, Eleanor leads the men of Aquitaine on Crusade. The march to Outremer will make her the most scandalous woman in all of Christendom. And one chance meeting between Eleanor and Henry Plantagenet will change the fate of England – forever …

This book promised a great deal but delivered very little. Actually, part of me wants to stop there because the thought of revisiting it for the purposes of this review is making my teeth squeak. But I appreciate that would probably be unfair, though to whom I’m not sure.

I was looking forward to reading it as the story of Eleanor of Aquitaine is an exciting one, which has been written about and filmed more than once. It’s therefore something of a surprise to find an author who can turn such glamour and thrills into a basically dull, irritating and badly-written novel.

I’m certainly surprised at MIRA Books. First off, our heroine tells us everything about herself and how wonderful she is from the very beginning and never stops. She is also rather too melodramatic and uses exclamation marks to such an extent that I wanted to gather them all together and beat her senseless with them. In one page we have her thoughts expressed thusly:

He does not look at it because he cannot take his eyes from your own face!

then:

Oh! So soon! My days in Aquitaine were fewer than I had supposed.

It all seems very clunky and needed a firm editor to trim it by at least a third so Eleanor might at least have become vaguely likeable.

Neither does the narrative voice flow smoothly. At key points, we leap hither and thither about the timeframe like crazed kangaroos as Eleanor has to pause to explain to the reader the reasons for what is happening: Have I said it was all done in a hurry? she breathes before rushing into the logic for why the action has suddenly jumped to her wedding. Then: Have I not mentioned Damascus? she cries to us when trying to explain Louis’s mood. Finally, much later on, we’re well into a scene when she finally tells us she has her child with her, which is the first we’ve heard of it. One can almost see the deliberate striving for dramatic effect, which simply detracts from the story …

Indeed, it wasn’t long before I found the only way to read this book without groaning and weeping was to treat it as a comedy, if an unintentional one. For instance, here Eleanor is reflecting on her sister’s happiness in love (as compared to her own miserable marriage) and her husband Louis’ unexpected coupling with her:

Ah, but the repercussions! Perhaps I should not have been so blinded by my sister’s happiness and Louis’s magnificent erection.

Well, my dears. There’s really something terribly dodgy about that line. Though, that said, when, still chortling, I showed it to my husband, he stared at me deadpan and said: well, every woman is impressed when a man builds a shed, aren’t they?… Which, of course, only made it worse.

Do not despair, however, as there are some glimmers of light in the literary darkness. I did enjoy Eleanor’s relationship with young Henry Plantagenet when they first meet, as it’s utterly delightful. I think this was partly as Henry was just far more vibrant as a character than Eleanor could ever be, and I was beyond eager for him to stay on the page.

Unfortunately a great deal of the book (about 80% I’d say) focuses on Eleanor’s desperate and long-winded attempts to end her marriage. My sympathies were far more with the monkish Louis, but neither character had charm, so it was very hard to be in their company for so long. It was a huge relief when they finally got divorced and Eleanor could eventually marry Henry who – at last! (you see – exclamation marks are catching!…) – reappears in the book. He’s the best thing about it, even though the writer, sadly, is still inclined to succumb to that melodramatic touch once Henry has moved up from being a minor character. Sigh.

Thinking about it, I think O’Brien would have been far better off cutting the whole Eleanor/Louis situation and actually starting off with Henry and Eleanor. That would have made a far more interesting and gripping novel than this.

So my ending thoughts are these: the cover of my version tells me that The Bookseller rates Anne O’Brien as “better than Philippa Gregory.” What utter rot. Ms Gregory has no need to fear as, with her hands tied together and one leg in shackles, she could still outwrite O’Brien. I’d also seriously question whether the Devil would have found the wretched Eleanor as portrayed here worth the bother. He’d have a far more exciting life with another consort entirely, believe me.

Devil’s Consort, MIRA Books, 2011. ISBN: 978 0 7783 0427 2
Also available (God preserve us) as an eBook

[Anne has made a vow that she will have nothing more to do with badly-written historical novels, but does wonder if this is in fact becoming a specialist genre in itself …]

About annebrooke

Anne Brooke lives in Surrey, UK, and writes in a variety of genres, including gay erotic romance, fantasy, comedy, thrillers, biblical fiction and the occasional chicklit novel. When not writing, she spends time in the garden attempting to differentiate between flowers and weeds, and in the allotment attempting to grow vegetables. She also loves the theatre and is a keen fan of crosswords and sudokus, as long as they're not too hard! Her websites can be found at: www.annebrooke.com, www.gayreads.co.uk, www.biblicalfiction.co.uk and www.gathandria.com (for fantasy fiction).

9 comments on “Devil’s Consort by Anne O’Brien: where I’m not actually sure the Devil would have bothered …

  1. kirstyjane
    October 27, 2011

    Anne, I LOVE your reviews!

  2. Anne Brooke
    October 27, 2011

    Kirsty, thank you! I wish I’d loved this book! 🙂

    Anne
    xxx

  3. John
    October 27, 2011

    Can a book be so bad it is good in some way? Or is it fair to criticise a book for epitomising the worst features of its genre? Is it fair to criticise a book against its promotional blurb (there is bound to be a gap)? Should a review be fair?

    I just thought these questions are worth thinking about (for 0.7 seconds in total). This book seems to have sparked amusement (if unintended & briefly) for more than one person and I am ashamed to say the review (fair or not) made me smile.

    Many thanks,

    John.

  4. Anne Brooke
    October 27, 2011

    Many thanks, John. I am still pondering on your very pertinent questions – but my brain is, alas, a slow one … 5.2 seconds and rising.

    I have to confess to rarely being fair, but always impassioned when it comes to books. My reviews are, as ever, highly personal! 🙂

    Anne

  5. Chris Harding
    October 29, 2011

    Anne, your review was an absolute joy to read – I know exactly what you mean about a novel making your teeth squeak! By the way, as a former journalist could I say that ‘fair’ doesn’t come into a review, since it is a personal opinion, and not an objective piece. If anything is unfair it is the professional blurb produced for book covers and press releases, which is designed as a marketing tool to promote a book and increase sales, just like an advert.

    If you start considering questions about the nature of fairness and the validity of value judgements you’d never write any reviews, or else they would become so bland they would be meaningless.

    You could, I suppose, present a case for not wanting to hurt an author’s feelings, but you are entitled to your opinion – as long as you can justify it. You go for it Anne: tell it like it is!

  6. Anne Brooke
    October 29, 2011

    Many thanks, Chris – and you’re so right – bland reviews are a crime to the literary profession indeed! But you may be glad to know my teeth have at last stopped squeaking now (much to my husband’s relief …)!

    🙂

    Anne
    xxxx

  7. Jackie
    October 29, 2011

    Really enjoyed this review, I chuckled all the way through it & laughed at certain sentences(the exclamation points). I think the subject is a little too serious for such an author. How did she turn Eleanor into a bimbo? As one of the few women of the time who managed to use her wits & experience, there is no way Eleanor was thinking such fluffy thoughts. And the “sister’s happiness” quote is just badly done. You made all the shortcomings into a highly entertaining post, which was fun to read. Obviously more fun than the actual book.

  8. Anne Brooke
    October 29, 2011

    Ha! Thanks, Jackie! I think that O’Brien started off as a Mills & Boon author (though am more than happy to be proved wrong here …), which may explain the amount of telling in the book, the black-and-white emotions and the bizarre fluffiness. If it’s true, it does make sense … 🙂

    Anne
    xxx

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