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Emma has written four books for children including Jessica Haggerthwaite Witch Dispatcher, shortlisted for the Branford Boase award. Her latest book, “How (Not) to Make Bad Children Good”, with fantastic illustrations by Emma Chicester Clark is out this week.*
Writing About Bad Children by Emma Barnes
I love writing about naughty children. I loved reading about their exploits as a child – whether it was Anne of Green Gables walking the roof, Daisy Bagthorpe setting fire to the dining-room, or Laura Ingalls giving her prissy sister a good slap. So naturally I wanted to create my own fictional little demon.
Writing about naughty children is harder than it looks. Too wild – and the adult world of parents and schools will be down upon you. Too tame – and your readers will lose interest. And unfortunately that balance is harder to find now than it has ever been.
How so, I hear you say. Isn’t children’s literature more embracing, and less preachy, than it has ever been?
Not really. Just look at this example:
A boy keeps kicking footballs over the garden fence. His crusty neighbour refuses to give them back. So that night he dons a mask, and breaks into her house. He finds the ball in her living-room, and when she comes into the room, he pretends to have a gun and threaten her, thus making his escape. She reports the incident to the police – exaggerating the circumstances – and he blackmails her into never keeping his ball again.
Which child is this? Horrid Henry or Dirty Bertie? No. This school boy rogue is Just William. First appearing in print in the 1930s, naughty William is able to do things that no contemporary child hero would be able to get away with. (Leading a gang, and regularly setting fire to things, being two others I can think of.) Naughty William may still be in print – but only because he is so wrapped around in the glow of nostalgia. Otherwise, just imagine the outcry!
For all the talk about liberal parenting, and “anything goes”, it just ain’t so. Most modern children do not go far afield compared to previous generations; they do very little without adult supervision. And the horror of children running amok will be even greater after the recent riots. If you want to write about a contemporary child in a realistic setting you have to take this into account.
And yet every new generation needs new anti-heroes. They need to see child heroes push the boundaries – if only in fantasy-land. It’s a form of escape. And it’s good fun.
So, how to make it work? Here are some thoughts – using as examples some wonderful, classic anti-heroes.
Younger children have the “Get Out of Jail Free” Card in that they can’t be blamed. Judy Blume’s Fudge falls into this category. When he eats his older brother’s pet turtle, it’s OK, because he really doesn’t know any better.
2) Keep it to home and school.
Current favourite Horrid Henry rarely goes beyond this world: his arch rival is his little brother, his bitterest enemies good old Mum and Dad. In the safe haven of the family, chaos can still reign!
3) Have a moral heart.
Perhaps my favourite naughty children are the Herdmanns, created by Barbara Robinson. They are seriously naughty – the first thing they do is to burn down a shed. They also bully, thieve, swear and smoke, and they never really pay for their bad actions either.
And yet nobody could object to the Herdmanns! For the stories have a moral centre to them that is irresistible, whatever your own particular set of spiritual beliefs, because it is ultimately compassionate and humane. Also, they are set in a small town world that seems inherently safe and secure in its values.
Which leads me on to –
4) Set your story in the past.
My Naughty Little Sister seems gloriously nostalgic now, but the stories were “old-fashioned” even when they were written, in that the writer was recalling her own childhood. A child’s exploits are a lot less threatening if they are taking place in another era.
5) Make it fantastical.
Pippi Longstocking refuses to go to school, but she is a larger-than-life character in a larger- than- life world, so that’s OK.
6) Make it inventive, clever and funny – and even your sternest teacher or parent will forgive you!
Have I made it work in my new book How (Not) To Make Bad Children Good?
Well, my heroine Martha is young, and her world is mainly that of home and school. There is a fantastical element too: the Guardian Agent Fred who is sent from an Agency in Outer Space that specialises in Making Bad Children Good. But the story is set now, because I wanted to write about the contemporary world we live in.
And is there a compassionate, moral heart? And is it inventive, clever and funny? I can only hope so: but readers must judge for themselves.
What are your thoughts on writing about naughty children? And who is your favourite little rascal?
Please let us know in the comments below.
*Rosyb, having seen a copy of “How (Not)…” (as it’s affectionately known) can confirm it is, indeed, a thing of beauty and urges you all to rush out and buy a copy for your wee friends and relations immediately.